Wednesday 29 June 2011

My Clone Wars Stories Episode 16: Revenge

Characters: Savage Opress, Tactical Droid TQ-11, Darth Maul, General Grievous, Jedi Master Krag, Jedi Knight Dev, Jedi Padawan Nixor, Clone Commander Kad, Thule Clone Troopers, Super Battle Droids.

Narration:"Zabrak hunt! After Count Dooku discovered that Savage Opress was being used by his former apprentice Asajj Ventress in a plan to eliminate him, that has left Dooku fuming. Now, Dooku has decided he wants to get payback on Savage, by removing him from the galaxy!"

Count Dooku sits in his palace on Serenno on a chair and ponders how the war is going. His attention is swiftly changed by the noise of the doors behind him opening and forward comes General Grievous into the room, who says "You sent for me Count?" and Dooku stands up and replies "Yes, the Zabrak Savage Opress has wasted valuable time of ours and has become a problematic situation to the galaxy, you must eliminate him" and Grievous says "That shouldn't be too hard!" and Dooku replies "He is a sloppy with his dueling, but he is still powerful, do not  underestimate him!" and Grievous says as he heads through the doors "I will take a squad of Super Battle Droids to destroy him!" and he leaves, heading for the hangar.

General Grievous arrives in the hangar and says to Tactical Droid TQ-11 "Get us a shuttle, so we can hunt down our Zabrak prey!" and TQ-11 replies "Yes, General" and TQ-11 leads Grievous over to a Separatist shuttle where they are followed on board by ten Super Battle Droids.

Meanwhile, unware of the forces trying to kill him, Savage Opress heads through the planet Thule searching for his brother. He hears the noise of a shuttle approaching but ignores it and keeps walking onwards to where the talisman is leading him. As Savage keeps walking, Grievous and the Droids sneak up behind him and Grievous says "I will attack, the Zabrak scum!" before jumping right in front of Savage Opress and saying "Hello there!" and after seeing Savage's look of surprise, he adds "Count Dooku sent me to kill you" and Savage replies "He should have chosen someone better! I can sense your weakness! Of not killing a Jedi Master, which makes you no match for a Sith like me!" and Grievous replies "I do not need to be able to beat a Jedi Master to crush you!" before activating two of his lightsabers and charging at Savage, who quickly ignites his double-bladed lightsaber and blocks the attack. Savage retaliates by force pushing Grievous aside and as Grievous stumbles, he yells "Droids, take him!" and the Super Battle Droids appear and shoot many bolts at Savage who swiftly blocks them with the deflected bolts taking out a couple of the Super Battle Droids. Savaage Opress quickly force pushes the remaing Super Battle Droids aside. Grievous looks at TQ-11 with disgust for cowering away from the fight and he yells at the Droid "Get in there and take him out!" and as TQ-11 raises his blaster to shoot Savage, SAvage senses him and uses the force to hurl TQ-11's blaster aside before Savage slices off the head of the Tactical Droid before stabbing it through the chest to finish it. GRievous then activates his four lightsabers and rushes Savage who blocks and uses force lightning on Grievous, knocking the cyborg general back, and as Savage uses more force lightning on GRievous, he says "At least, one good thing came out of Dooku's training" before slicing his lightsaber across Grievous's chest, leaving a mark there before he runs off to escape.

Savage Opress runs on to make sure there is enough distance between him and General Grievous. Savage then spots a cave in the distance and thinks to himself "I can rest here and try to find my brother again tomorow" but as he enters the cave, he finds it is already occupied, and as the person already in the cave lifts his head up and looks at Savage, he gasps "My... brother!" and it is indeed Darth Maul staring up at him. Maul notices the lightsaber on Savage's belt and says "You are a Jedi, come to hunt me?" and Savage says "No, *Activates lightsaber*, I am a sith and you are my brother, I was told it is my destiny to find you" and Maul smiles slightly, to Savage it looked like a hideous grimace and says "I have a lot of brothers, my whole kin are my brothers" and Savage says "I was told you could train me to become more powerful to defeat the Jedi" and Maul looks at Savage coldly and says "I can. But, I need proof that you can fight and destroy Jedi" before adding "There is a Jedi outpost several clicks way, I will fly you there, and watch how you get on, but I will not help you, even if you are about to be killed" and Savage replies "I understand".

Darth Maul flies Savage Opress in his Sith Infiltrator to the position of the Jedi outpost and says "It is time, show me what you can do!" and Savage replies "I will". Three Clone's await Savage as he exits the SIth infiltrator and one of them holds up a hand and says "You are not authorized to be here, state your business!" and Savage replies "To kill everyone at this outpost!" and he ignites half of his lightsaber to stab through the chest of the Clone asking questions before activating the other  half to take off the other two Clone's heads.

The Gotal Jedi Knight Dev appears before the Verpine Jedi Master Krag and Rodian Jedi Padawan Nixor and says "There is a disturbance, I have got word that three Clone's have just been killed by someone with a double-bladed red lightsaber and Nixor says "He is too strong, we must evacuate and Krag says "No! It is our duty to defend this place and we will die trying if we must". While they are talking, a Clone Commander with two DC-17 pistols with a black armor and a helmet design of a Bith head appears before them and taking off his helmet, named Kad, he says "General, the Zabrak has wiped out our whole legion, it's just us and the pilot on the AT-TE left" and Krag says "Get on the AT-TE and help protect us, the three of us will confront the Zabrak"

Savage Opress strides forward, having killed many Clone's and he watches as a Verpine, Rodian and Gotal jedi appear before him and the Verpine says "We challenge you to a duel, Zabrak!" and Savage replies "It will not be much of a duel!" and he quickly stabs Nixor, who had not been prepared for such a duel and force pushes Nixor's dead body into the Gotal Dev before stabbing Dev as well. Krag is in panic after seeing the deaths of the other Jedi and only manages to block two of Savage's attacks before he is slain too. As Savage relaxes a blaster bolt hits the ground near him, almost killing him and he spots an AT-TE walker. Savage force jumps into the air, landing on the AT-TE and slices through the middle of it, blowing up the AT-TE in a huge explosion. Out of the rubble crawls Clone Commander Kad, who is mortally wounded by the explosion. As Savage stands over him with his lightsaber poised to strike, Kad gasps and says "No, please-have mercy!" and Savage coldly replies "I show no mercy" before stabbing down with his lightsaber.

Savage Opress walks way from the dead bodies off all those that he has killed, and he climbs aboard the Sith infiltrator and as he joins Maul in the cockpit, Maul turns and says "We'll make a good warrior out of you yet" as the story ends!

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